Carolyne J Montgomery - Reader & Writer

Carolyne Reads and Writes

Aging

In Season

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As I write this, a honking cacophony of hundreds of Canada geese serenades me. In the last few years, I’ve come to expect this seasonal frenzy of test flights and day-and-night-long imperative squawking. Why do they honk all night long? It’s a complicated hierarchy commanding the formations necessary for migration.

One morning, soon after an undisturbed sleep, I will wake up to a quiet, empty beach. Who knows where they all go. The smaller, quieter Brandt geese that have migrated from the high Arctic to overwinter in Comox will keep me company over the winter.

Watermarked for September

Chapter 9: Moving On

This month’s installment examines how siblings separate as they grow older, how secrets divide them and their paths diverge. How to maintain childhood intimacy? How to rediscover it in later years?

At the cottage on Thanksgiving weekend, young adult Stéphanie wants to trust Brianna with the secret of her rape. Brianna withholds her knowledge of her half-sister, Sophia, not realizing Stéphanie already knows.

Honouring Dolly Parton and Gloria Steinem

Dolly Parton

Dolly did not like to be thought of as a feminist. She was a philanthropist. She worked within the system, using her power—her constructed Jessica Rabbit physique, her work ethic, and her musical talents—to attract the attention of the people with power (males) and effect the changes she believed in. That’s one way to get in the door and at the table.

Parton on the Phil Donahue Show on 30 April 1977 Photograph: Paul Natkin/Getty Images

Laura Marling interviewed her and Emmylou Harris in 2016 at the time of their Trio album re-release (including Linda Ronstadt). Laura Marling asked what it was like being women working in recording studios. Dolly agreed that while women were always outnumbered, she and Emmylou felt like “one of the boys”, musicians first, working to serve the song, the goal of everyone in the studio. No problem. For Dolly, her competency kept all the doors open. She recorded over 1000 songs.

She maximized her talents and generated the wealth to support her advocacy agenda—health for the socially disadvantaged—a hospital for children, mRNA vaccination technology with Moderna, literacy via her Imagination Library, allyship for homosexual relationships, and scholarships for her employees and families at Dollywood.

She knew how to attract attention, have fun and get a lot of hard stuff done all at the same time.

Gloria Steinem

Gloria Steinem, a second-wave feminist, had a different approach—change the system to recognize reproductive rights, equality in the workplace, and freedom from violence and harassment. She rallied to support women during pregnancy and childrearing and sought recognition for unpaid work (domestic, eldercare, volunteering, etc.)

It was the 70s. There was no internet or email or personal computers. Communication was through newspapers, radio, TV, gatherings, rallies and magazines. MS Magazine, founded in 1972 by Ms Steinam, a journalist. In its inaugural issue, women who had chosen abortion stood up to be counted.

Here in Canada, Chatelaine magazine, with Doris Anderson as editor, also championed feminist issues. As a young fertile feminist in the 70s and 80s, I supported the CARAL and the abortionist Morgentaler.

And while there are still geographic and financial limitations to abortion access, since 1988, abortion on demand is a legal, healthcare decision in Canada. Nobody else gets to decide. Despite everything that Ms Steinem achieved, she lived to see reproductive rights rolled back in her country.

Emma Watson (yes, that Harry Potter Emma Watson) writes about Ms. Steinem in The New Yorker with the perspective of a millennial feminist.

“The patriarchy is not something we live conveniently outside of. We were born inside it; it lives inside us. It has shaped our ideas of beauty, love, goodness, success, and safety, and we cannot simply announce ourselves liberated and be done with it.”

Gloria’s Foundation is establishing her New York home as a permanent site for organization and activism.

Being a feminist in 2026 means wanting equal work for equal pay, a society free from violence and sexual harassment, equal opportunity for advancement, contraception and reproductive rights and access to abortion and having value in society as beyond being obedient, fertile, f***able and feminine.

It means responding to the specific needs of girls and women of all ages, abilities, orientations, identifications and class. It means big tent feminism.

All of us must do more work to advance opportunities and protections for all females and female-identifying persons in society.

Meanwhile, I recommend listening to Trio and the beautiful vocal harmonies of Linda, Emmylou and Dolly.

Watermarked for October:

Chapter 10: To The Island

This story will be posted on October 15th. I’ll be in Italy riding a bike in Puglia but am keeping my promise to publish a story each month.

The cover of the collection comes from this story— A fall lake in Quebec, just north of Montreal. Loons leaving to overwinter at the sea. A wistful mother reflecting on her failings as a mother.

Claire swims in the lake, reflecting on the vulnerabilities of widowhood and aging. With Stéphanie’s pregnancy, will she get a second chance to love her daughters and grandchild?

Thanks again for reading and commenting. I look forward to sharing more with you in November.

Carolyne

“The Lusty Month of May” (in the garden at least)

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Watermarked

This month’s short story installment is “The Hummingbird,” a heavy story (trigger warnings for rape and anorexia) inspired by cautionary tales from my misspent adolescence. It’s the time-worn tale of a younger sister wanting to impress her older sister. It is one of the stronger ones in the collection. I hope you enjoy it.

Recognition for “Skywalking”

My short story, “Skywalking,” was e-published by the Victoria Writers’ Society in their publication, Island Writer, the Summer 26 edition. If you read the introduction by Valerie White, the editor, you’ll learn that there was a broad acceptance policy for this issue, but it’s nice to be recognized.

I like my two quirky characters, Harry and Edith, who meet in a charity shop in Victoria. Harry looks up to Edith but is puzzled by her choices and her expectations of him. (aren’t we all sometimes puzzled by people’s expectations of us?) Many thanks to Larry Bambrick, who advised me on the revisions.

The BC Masters Swimming Provincials in Kelowna

To mark turning seventy, I entered a swim meet. Like the slogan on the old Lululemon bags advised, “Do Something That Scares You…” It was slightly scary. I learned a lot at the three-day provincial event—when and how to warm up, where to leave my flip-flops and shirt, when to get up on the blocks and more. The experienced members of my team (The Sharks Masters) provided bottomless positive support. There was a lot of action, amazing athletes and a competitive vibe. I got to use the skills I’d gained by the time I hit the last event. There’s a lot more to learn, but yes, I’d do it again. Maybe as soon as November.

Reading and Writing

I’ve got a pile of short stories I should be revising. Instead, I’m negotiating with three fictional characters who might want to be in a novel. They’re busy considering the commitment to all those scenes and plot points and whether they want to change over the course of three hundred pages.

Meanwhile, I read Emma Donoghue’s Giller-nominated page-turner, The Paris Express. It’s a wonderful fin-de-siecle, clock-ticking, pot-boiler of a novel.

And now…

Back to the garden to catch up on all the pruning and planting I’ve delayed and deferred from last year.

See you in June, and thanks for reading.

Reflecting on Aging and Kathy Page’s Memoir

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Watermarked

Welcome to the March edition of my short story collection, Watermarked. This month’s story, “Alterations,” is a tale of a grandmother wondering what she owes her daughter and her new grandchild. I hope you enjoy this installment. Please feel free to share it with anyone who might be interested.

Navigating the Challenges of Aging

Aging brings with it a well-known set of demands and challenges. Recently, I found myself disheartened by the time and energy required to address the various physical needs of getting older. My days now include regular appointments to optimize my vision and hearing. I’m wearing a brace for sports to support a knee ligament injury. I faithfully cooperate with cancer screenings of my breasts, bowels, and cervix. While I sometimes resent these responsibilities, I am grateful that retirement gives me more time and flexibility to attend to my health.

Kathy Page’s In This Faulty Machine

Last week, I picked up Kathy Page’s memoir, In This Faulty Machine. In her memoir, Page details her experiences transitioning from an accomplished writer and educator—having authored eleven books and most recently served as faculty at Nanaimo University—to a person living with Parkinson’s. (PWP) She recounts this transformation—the adaptations and losses—with candour, wit, and insight. The book is dedicated to her sister in New Zealand, who I assume, is a major source of support for her.

A few years ago, I met her at the Denman Island Readers and Writers Festival, and bought her short story collection, The Two of Us. This collection was recognized as a best book of 2016 and long-listed for the Giller Prize. In the title story, a pregnant English instructor is deeply affected by an elder student’s piece questioning the morality of bringing a child into an unpredictable and often harsh world—a warning delivered too late. The story raises the question of how to continue despite all we know and all we have yet to learn. For those who enjoy swimming, “Open Water” offers another compelling narrative: it follows a coach with a complicated past as he mentors a swimming prodigy and navigates the complexities of the prodigy’s family.

If you are familiar with Kathy Page’s fiction, you’ll know that her works are driven by character and relationships. Her novel Dear Evelyn won the 2018 Rogers Writers’ Trust Fiction Prize.

In This Faulty Machine, Page describes her transition from a vibrant, busy life—where she balanced her creative pursuits, academic responsibilities, and homesteading on Salt Spring Island—to adapting to her life as a PWP. The memoir, structured in twenty chapters, provides unvarnished, detailed observations about her transformation, deliberately avoiding the term “journey.

Page writes openly about her losses and the ongoing effort to find meaning, skilfully blending her clear-eyed perspective with humour. She provides context about the history and current medical understanding of Parkinson’s disease. She describes the difficulty of leaving her beloved home on Salt Spring Island and adjusting to a new home and life in Victoria. The book explores the realities of chronic illness, including a chapter on the rigours and indignities of managing severe constipation. Page considers the potential advantage of her loss of smell—anosmia—which was an early sign of her Parkinson’s.

Page grew up under the influence of a strong-willed, hyperbolic mother who influenced her writing style and her interest in conflict in relationships. One of the memoir’s most poignant moments is her relief at not having to share her diagnosis with her mother, knowing her mother would have blamed her for her illness, attributing it to some personal shortcoming. The complexities of the mother-daughter relationship endure, even after a mother’s passing.

Page takes a pragmatic look at concepts like positivity, meditation, and the search for meaning in the face of adversity. She admits that meditation is not for her. Her narrative includes frank accounts of the deaths of fellow members in her PWP group and explores the emotional and physical burdens that progressive chronic illness places on caregivers. In This Faulty Machine is essential reading for anyone (medical or otherwise) who cares for people with Parkinson’s disease.

A Word from Caroline Adderson

Caroline Adderson offers high praise for Page’s memoir, stating: “In This Faulty Machine is one of those rare books that compels you to rethink your life.”

Until Next Time

Happy reading and writing and rethinking your life. I look forward to any comments. I hope the comments section is working properly this month. I’m off to the Words on the Water conference in Campbell River this weekend. See you in April for the fourth installment of my collection.